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Never Stop until I find you by ~flame-fist:iconflame-fist:



I sit here
Praying to the sky
Holding the only thing you left behind

Wishing i had your soothing voice
To make me see through this choice

You have fled into the darkness
While I sit here on the edge

I can not see why
you left me here

All my memories are tied
with you

Ice cream on mondays
Ramen on sundays

Training in the morning
Racing with the moon

I will find you.
I will not stop until I do.
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Author's Comments

This is a poem to go with the picture done by :iconkitsune-nilde: "Never stop until i you." if you want to see the pic its at this link [link]

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:iconkitsune-nilde:
awww thats awesome... my picture has a poem to go with it now ^^ sweet!

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SEPHIROTH: My desire is this, Cloud. To use this Planet as a ship to travel through the darkness of the universe. Just like Mother did long ago.

CLOUD: ...So you want to be a space pirate. Just like your mom.

~thorne_scratch (LiveJournal)
:iconflame-fist:
I thought you might like it

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Zelda: Welcome to my plaground. The entry fee is one heart.

Link: Damn it I just got this damn thing
:iconkitsune-nilde:
I linked to my picture in my comments too ^^

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SEPHIROTH: My desire is this, Cloud. To use this Planet as a ship to travel through the darkness of the universe. Just like Mother did long ago.

CLOUD: ...So you want to be a space pirate. Just like your mom.

~thorne_scratch (LiveJournal)
:iconflame-fist:
we can call it a collab

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Zelda: Welcome to my plaground. The entry fee is one heart.

Link: Damn it I just got this damn thing
:iconemotionally-executed:
The last two lines are my favorites.
It might be because I like puncuation. XD >.>

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Join! ~deutsch

Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
:iconflame-fist:
sick burn but thanks for the fav anyway

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Zelda: Welcome to my plaground. The entry fee is one heart.

Link: Damn it I just got this damn thing
:iconemotionally-executed:
LAWL.
I'm just picking on you.
But seriously.
I did like the last two lines a lot.

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Join! ~deutsch

Bis dann.
Ich werde warten.
:iconflame-fist:
the most important lines in a poem are the last ones

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Zelda: Welcome to my plaground. The entry fee is one heart.

Link: Damn it I just got this damn thing
:iconmorning-miracle:
lol, when I saw the word ';poem' im the artist comment I thought 'serious?' and feard something nightmarish long... but this is nice, short, divided with two lines and even I can understand it XD

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Just going to warn you: I talk a lot, and my internet connection is really slow - so conversations might take some time ^^

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